“A Queen knows everything. I know past and present and future. I see so clearly I see the shadows. Do you know that I am called Queen of Shadows?” Perfect. And points for a three hundred pound heroine.
But the tricky question is: how do you get this to paper? The writing here feels real, it makes you feel like you are there. The best I can come up with is that the writer needs to feel like she is there when she’s writing. How else could this be conveyed?